This is the official beginning of my Recorded Poetry Series. I am starting with a poem that I have posted here on the blog, numerous times; in fact, the very first version of it was here, but it was also the poem that began my relationship with an amazing editor, Heather Lenz, and marked my reconnection with poetry and a writing life. This version is from the official Stepping Stones publication in 2015. The poem is called, “Twenty Five”
Twenty Five
Twenty- five years ago, I watched strangers
lower my mother’s body into the ground.
It was raining that day.
The soil swallowed up her oak and pink satin casket.
Heavy. Cold.
Not a place for a woman whose laugh lit up rooms,
whose touch soothed even the deepest aches.
My breath and heart plummeted into the hollow earth and
I broke into pieces that scattered in the rain.
For twenty- five years I have been collecting them.
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February 24, 2019 at 9:57 am
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February 24, 2019 at 9:58 am
Poetry for soul.
February 24, 2019 at 10:13 am
Thank you!
February 24, 2019 at 10:23 am
Susan this is so beautiful. To hear you read it in your delicate voice is such a gift. Not even a waiver, you have such strength. I’m crying. ❤️
February 24, 2019 at 12:01 pm
I know how deeply you understand this. I love you, my friend!!!
February 24, 2019 at 10:59 am
I was on my phone when I read and ‘liked’ bit for some reason I couldn’t get the audio. I have now. It’s good, calm. Neat ~ George
February 24, 2019 at 12:02 pm
Thank you so much, George!!!!
February 24, 2019 at 11:11 am
Wow–and it’s made so much more powerful when it’s in your voice–I love the way you read this:-)
February 24, 2019 at 12:04 pm
Thank you so much, Suzanne. It is in some ways, such a simple poem, so I am glad it came through for you as more than that. I actually wrote it 6 years ago.
February 24, 2019 at 12:07 pm
It was the way you enunciated and the tone you used–just the right amount of gravitas:-)
February 24, 2019 at 12:58 pm
Oh Suzanne, you totally made my day! Thank you! Speaking is not generally my forte, so I am super happy you liked it!!!
February 24, 2019 at 1:06 pm
Oh that last line Susan. This poem is amazing. So emotional. I haven’t listened to it yet. Just about to try and find where to click to listen to it. I have heard your voice befire though, and speaking IS yoyr firte in my humble opinion. You have a beautiful voice, x
February 24, 2019 at 1:07 pm
Thank you Lovely Lorraine!!!!
February 24, 2019 at 1:53 pm
You are very welcome Susan. I did listen to it and you speak it beautifulky x
February 24, 2019 at 1:06 pm
Beautifully profound.
February 24, 2019 at 1:07 pm
Thank you so much, Yassy!!!!
February 24, 2019 at 1:11 pm
You are welcome !
February 24, 2019 at 2:34 pm
Simply beautiful.
February 24, 2019 at 2:43 pm
Love this! The slow fade is a nice touch, too. A lovely elegy.
February 25, 2019 at 7:39 am
Thank you so much, Bruce!
February 24, 2019 at 4:24 pm
Amazing. 🙂
February 25, 2019 at 7:40 am
You are lovely! Thank you!
February 25, 2019 at 9:42 am
You’re welcome. 😊
February 24, 2019 at 4:46 pm
Very beautiful and powerful. You’re so gifted. 🙂
February 25, 2019 at 7:40 am
You just made my day, Steven!!! Thank you so much!
February 25, 2019 at 4:32 pm
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February 24, 2019 at 8:17 pm
Freaking loving your recorded series! ❤
February 25, 2019 at 7:41 am
You are the best, Lady!!! Thank you so much!
February 24, 2019 at 9:22 pm
Yes! Love your poem, I will be checking up on you YouTube channel, too!💜
February 25, 2019 at 7:43 am
Thank you for all of your support with this Kim! I am very grateful!
February 25, 2019 at 7:46 am
always.
February 24, 2019 at 11:12 pm
I love this one. Beautiful and sad.
February 25, 2019 at 7:44 am
Thank you, Gorgeous Lady!!!
February 25, 2019 at 5:54 am
I hope writing and sharing about your mother brings you comfort.
I lost my mom in 1997 and it has helped me as well–
February 25, 2019 at 7:46 am
I am so sorry for your loss, and glad you have found some comfort in writing about your Mom. I do as well, but it took me a long time to be able to write about her. She has been gone 31 years now.
February 28, 2019 at 7:40 pm
Thank you, it really felt great once the words started flowing
February 25, 2019 at 1:41 pm
So beautiful! I love this idea of using your voice. Creative and calming.
February 26, 2019 at 8:13 am
Thank you so much!!!!
February 25, 2019 at 1:43 pm
Does grief last forever? Change shape or dissipate? I’ve been thinking of this a lot since my father was killed 3 years ago.
February 26, 2019 at 8:15 am
This is sad but so beautifully written; I hope that makes sense. For me, the grief never dissipates, but does change shape. Thank you for reading and commenting!
February 26, 2019 at 9:39 am
“For twenty-five years I’ve been collecting them.” This hit me hard. Beautiful writing.❤️
February 26, 2019 at 11:36 am
Thank you, so much!!!!
February 26, 2019 at 7:27 pm
So powerful and beautiful, Susan.
February 27, 2019 at 6:05 am
Thank you so much, Angela!
February 27, 2019 at 8:03 am
You’re welcome!